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    Camila Valeria
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    Never Out of Style

    Post by Camila Valeria on Sun Jun 27, 2010 10:24 pm

    These times, they're way too complicated
    It all needs to be elaborated
    You get into it for a while
    But some things never go out of style
    You still need stars when your wishing at night
    A best friend to set you right
    A good laugh
    A warm bath
    And a beautiful song you could sing along to
    Good news that will make you cry
    All the little things that money cant buy
    No war
    No more
    Just that big rainbow outside my window


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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by ASL on Mon Jun 28, 2010 4:53 pm

    There is a mistake in the first line.

    These times there("There" should be "They're") way too complicated
    Also there needs to be a comma between 'times" and "there". You also spelled "beautiful" wrong.

    And you need to capitalize the "First, last, middle, and all important words" in the title.
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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by Camila Valeria on Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:14 pm

    BLAH BLAH BLAH
    What are you, my father? Rolling Eyes
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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by ASL on Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:43 pm

    No. But since you are a professor, your writing needs to be accomplished and well edited to show an example.


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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by Camila Valeria on Mon Jul 05, 2010 1:42 pm

    OH WHATever!!! you can be SERIOUSLY impossible! Mad
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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by ASL on Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:13 pm

    That's not what other people think.


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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by Camila Valeria on Wed Jul 07, 2010 11:41 pm

    i dont care what other people think.this is what i think. and im not other people,im me. Razz
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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by ASL on Thu Jul 08, 2010 1:35 pm

    Well yah of course you're you but what does that have to do with anything?


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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by Camila Valeria on Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:35 am

    im not everyone else so please dont compare me with them. and if your trying to understand me at all u never will because i dont even understand myself... yeah i dont get that either...
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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by ASL on Mon Jul 12, 2010 11:39 am

    Ok. Whatever.


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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by Camila Valeria on Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:36 pm

    whatever Joey Rolling Eyes
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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by ASL on Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:54 pm

    Seriously stop.


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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by Camila Valeria on Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:06 pm

    fine fine fine! Rolling Eyes
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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by ASL on Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:08 pm

    thanks


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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by Camila Valeria on Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:26 pm

    your welcome.
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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by ASL on Thu Jul 15, 2010 9:06 pm

    Alright..........*Lock*


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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by The Hawk's Eye on Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:04 pm

    *Unlock*

    Read this to understand why.


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    Re: Never Out of Style

    Post by ASL on Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:27 pm

    Serious, why?


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