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    Camila Valeria
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    Let Go

    Post by Camila Valeria on Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:47 pm

    Let go of responsibility
    Forget about the rules
    Be freed of all your stress and grief
    stop using the wrong tools
    Let yourself fly
    Let yourself go
    run and be free
    go on and soar
    forget about your problems
    who cares about the time
    just let yourself be happy
    you know its not a crime
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    Re: Let Go

    Post by ASL on Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:52 pm

    So far, this is the best poem (Grammar, punctuation, and capitalization wise) that you've written.

    *Moved to Poetry forum*


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    Re: Let Go

    Post by Camila Valeria on Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:37 am

    thank you very much... wow for once im not mad at you. so what else do you tnk???
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    Re: Let Go

    Post by ASL on Mon Jul 12, 2010 11:40 am

    That you still need to capitalize more. Razz


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    Re: Let Go

    Post by Camila Valeria on Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:34 pm

    you suck.
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    Re: Let Go

    Post by ASL on Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:26 pm

    No I don't.


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    Re: Let Go

    Post by Camila Valeria on Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:32 pm

    well your acting pretty sucky right now... Crying or Very sad
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    Re: Let Go

    Post by ASL on Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:00 pm

    I don't think so.


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    Re: Let Go

    Post by Camila Valeria on Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:11 pm

    well i do.
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    Re: Let Go

    Post by ASL on Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:13 pm

    *Lock*


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    Re: Let Go

    Post by The Hawk's Eye on Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:04 pm

    *Unlock*

    Read this to understand why.


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    Re: Let Go

    Post by ASL on Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:27 pm

    Again, read WHAT? Neutral


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