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    will_c
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    sick (r.i.p M.M 3/27/09)

    Post by will_c on Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:21 pm

    good one day bad the others.
    trying to fight off , we wish it was a dream
    but it's life.
    tears comin down , is it true please not .
    not now , not ever , why us.
    he can't fight longer, it's been a long time .
    Don't give up please , it's to late.....
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    Re: sick (r.i.p M.M 3/27/09)

    Post by ASL on Thu Jun 10, 2010 4:57 pm

    That is um..... good.Try to capitalize some words.

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    Re: sick (r.i.p M.M 3/27/09)

    Post by ashleyr on Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:26 pm

    Good (:
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    Re: sick (r.i.p M.M 3/27/09)

    Post by hotpink101 on Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:31 am

    good job Will. Surprised
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    Re: sick (r.i.p M.M 3/27/09)

    Post by mspersin on Fri Jun 11, 2010 11:36 pm

    Powerful poem. I can tell this will be a theme in your future writing. Keep at it, it is an honor to your friend's memory to share his legacy with your friends!

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